In order to explain my opinion about this story I must understand it well, but this time again it's hard for me unfortunatly.I didn't catch the core and the reason of the narrator's deed, so I can not be convinced in my opinion.
Anyway while reading the story I felt that in the end of the action there will be killing. I begin to suspect the narrator from the first words. I didn't like him. It's hard for me to explain why.
I hold that responsibility for any deed can't be a death. I maintain no one has right to kill.
So, to conclude I want to add I have doubts about correctness of my understanding, but I hope the idea of my belief is clear.
Anyway while reading the story I felt that in the end of the action there will be killing. I begin to suspect the narrator from the first words. I didn't like him. It's hard for me to explain why.
I hold that responsibility for any deed can't be a death. I maintain no one has right to kill.
So, to conclude I want to add I have doubts about correctness of my understanding, but I hope the idea of my belief is clear.
unfortunatly - spelling
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IN THE END
but
AT THE AND OF smth.
there will be killing. - article
I felt that
I begin to suspect
->>> tence
I hold that responsibility for any deed can't be a death. - didn't get the idea of the phrase cause then you express an opposite point
about correctness of my understanding - article - I'd use "the"
Good job!
It's very nice that you use new expressions, Maxim!
so many mistakes again(
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