I find this story very humorous. The reason is in the end of the story. I must say, that while reading I though that the end will be sad. Miss Martha has a sympathetic heart as narrator mentioned through the story. And this is the core! It was real fail! She tried to help a poor man, that's all. But instead she damaged may be his life or at least the deal of last his months. The problem was in mistaken thoughts about the man. He wasn't an artist, he was architect! The situation is ironic, the lead heroes are described very well to realize that you can predict the end of story, but...don't try to predict! It's fantastic turn of events. The best thing in this story is it's final.
I can say to sum up: “You shouldn't make a conclusion about a person by his form”
I can say to sum up: “You shouldn't make a conclusion about a person by his form”
in the end of the story
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but
IN the end.
I though that the end will be sad - tense, spelling
as narrator mentioned - article
It was real fail! - article
last his months - word order
he was architect - article
the lead heroes - the main
the end of story - article
It's fantastic turn of events - there is a ...
its final not it's (= it is)
by his form
All in all the essay is good!!!
But grammar makes it C-. :(